Question

16．假定你是李華，你對(duì)倫敦一家培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)在網(wǎng)上發(fā)布的暑期夏令營活動(dòng)廣告很感興趣．
請(qǐng)給該機(jī)構(gòu)寫信報(bào)名．內(nèi)容需包括：
（1）報(bào)名的原因
（2）詢問相關(guān)情況；開始時(shí)間和時(shí)長，相關(guān)費(fèi)用；
（3）你的期待
注意：100字左右．
適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．
信的開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好．
Dear Sir/Madam
As a student from China，I'm going to London to visit my uncle and his family for two weeks this coming winter vacation，and your ad has come to my notice．Actually，I'm interested in the activities you offer，which I feel will be a good chance to improve my spoken English．（高分句型一） That's why I'm writing to sign up for it．
Meanwhile，I would feel honored if you could give me some more details about the camp．To begin with，when it will begin，and how long the camp will last．Secondly，I'd appreciate it if you could tell me how much it will cost．（高分句型二）Actually，it's my hope that I can have my English improved and make some English friends in the camp．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息對(duì)倫敦一家培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)在網(wǎng)上發(fā)布的暑期夏令營活動(dòng)廣告很感興趣，給該機(jī)構(gòu)寫信報(bào)名，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）報(bào)名的原因（2）詢問相關(guān)情況；開始時(shí)間和時(shí)長，相關(guān)費(fèi)用；（3）你的期待2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Actually事實(shí)上；sign up報(bào)名；To begin with首先；make  friends交朋友；
 Actually，I'm interested in the activities you offer，which I feel will be a good chance to improve my spoken English．（高分句型一）
Secondly，I'd appreciate it if you could tell me how much it will cost．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam：
      As a student from China，I'm going to London to visit my uncle and his family for two weeks this coming winter vacation，and your ad has come to my notice．Actually，I'm interested in the activities you offer，which I feel will be a good chance to improve my spoken English．（高分句型一） That's why I'm writing to sign up for it．
     Meanwhile，I would feel honored if you could give me some more details about the camp．To begin with，when it will begin，and how long the camp will last．Secondly，I'd appreciate it if you could tell me how much it will cost．（高分句型二）Actually，it's my hope that I can have my English improved and make some English friends in the camp．
     Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．