【題目】假設你是李華，在一個禮品網(wǎng)站為你的姐姐訂購了一份生日禮物。禮物是一個標有姓名、生日及祝福語的有卡通動物形象的粉色杯子。收到禮物后你和姐姐都很滿意。請給你的英國筆友Tom發(fā)一封郵件.

內(nèi)容：

1.描述網(wǎng)購的禮物；

2.介紹網(wǎng)上支付及配送情況；

3.談談你對網(wǎng)上購物的看法。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)不少于120個；

2.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。

Dear Tom,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago.

____________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago. It is a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It’s so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I likes it at the first sight.

Besides, I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. And so is the delivery service. I have received the cup within two days. Don’t you think it’s very fast?

I have enjoyed shopping online very much through this experience ,. There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays .We don’t have to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good variety of choices on the internet.Agree with me?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文，要求以所給的提示為內(nèi)容寫一篇封電子郵件。根據(jù)提示的信息可知，文章應寫書信，用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時為主。寫作時要充分發(fā)揮想象，適當?shù)靥砑幼约旱挠^點，使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并達到要求的字數(shù)。此外，為了提高文章檔次，還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯，并添加關聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達格式規(guī)范，語言流暢。第一段向筆友描述了網(wǎng)購的禮物；第二段介紹了網(wǎng)上支付及貨物配送的情況；第三段就網(wǎng)上購物談了自己的看法。本文的亮點是運用了復雜的句式如非限制性定語從句等，提升了文章的檔次；There is no doubt that...、so...that 等結(jié)構(gòu)的運用也為文章增添了亮色。

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