【題目】假設(shè)你是李越，請(qǐng)給張老師(Mr. / Ms. Zhang)寫(xiě)一封100-120個(gè)詞的英文信。根據(jù)你的情況，告訴老師你希望在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作方面得到幫助。你可以希望老師著重糾正語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，也可以希望老師在作文結(jié)構(gòu)方面給予指導(dǎo)，并說(shuō)明你的理由。

注意：1. 信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；

2. 不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，視為考試作弊。

Dear Mr. / Ms. Zhang,

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Yue

【答案】

Dear Mr. / Ms. Zhang,

I’m writing to let you know that I need your help with my English writing. As is known to all, grammar plays a very important part in language communication. But I feel that I have problems with my grammar. I’m afraid that I’m not able to identify the specific errors on my own. I’d be grateful if you could point out and correct my grammar errors. What’s more, I’m used to the Chinese way of thinking, which keeps me from organizing my ideas in a proper way. I was wondering if you could also help me improve the structure of my writing.

I’m looking forward to making great progress under your instructions. Thank you in advance!

Yours sincerely,

Li Yue

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是要求寫(xiě)一封信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、仔細(xì)研讀題目所給信息，不要誤解信息，也不要漏掉要點(diǎn)，明確自己是以哪個(gè)身份來(lái)寫(xiě)這封信。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，符合書(shū)信口吻和語(yǔ)氣。詞匯短語(yǔ)豐富，如As is known to all眾所周知，identify the specific errors確認(rèn)科學(xué)性的錯(cuò)誤。有高級(jí)句式，如What’s more, I’m used to the Chinese way of thinking, which keeps me from organizing my ideas in a proper way.用到了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。

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