Question

【題目】假如你是李華，是某中學(xué)高一的新生。請你給以前的好朋友小明寫封信。介紹你現(xiàn)在各方面的情況。信中包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．學(xué)校環(huán)境優(yōu)美，有一個很大的操場，樹木成蔭。

2．老師對我們學(xué)習(xí)上要求嚴(yán)格，生活中很友好，關(guān)心同學(xué)。

3．身邊的同學(xué)都很優(yōu)秀，很勤奮。彼此相處融洽。

4．高中生活充滿壓力，但是在老師的幫助下，我充滿信心，一定會不斷取得進(jìn)步。

注意：1. 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫；

2. 開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 詞數(shù)：100左右。

Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you my lifestyle in the new school.

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Xiao Ming,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you my lifestyle in the new school.

Our school is very beautiful with a big playground. There are green trees and all kinds of sweet flowers all the year round. The teachers are very strict with us in study, but after class, they are friendly and care about us very much. My new classmates are all very excellent and always working very hard. They help me a lot in study as well as in my daily life and we get along with each other quite well.

Stressful as the school life is, I am full of confidence. I think with the help of my teachers, I will make progress.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇書信，要點(diǎn)齊全，格式正確，采用三段式，文章布局合理，文中使用高級句子。The teachers are very strict with us in study, but after class, they are friendly and care about us very much. But在這里構(gòu)成表示轉(zhuǎn)折的并列句；Stressful as the school life is, I am full of confidence. As引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句堪稱經(jīng)典；I think with the help of my teachers, I will make progress. 句中使用賓語從句；另外一些高級詞組all kinds of，all the year round，are very strict with，as well as，get along with，am full of，with the help of, make progress. 為文章增色添彩。