Question

【題目】你校英文報正在策劃一期以環(huán)保為主題的�？�。假如你是該報編輯李明，請給大家寫一封倡議書，要點如下：1.步行或騎車上學(xué)；2.及時關(guān)水龍頭、關(guān)燈；3.不亂扔垃圾。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear students,

I’m writing this letter to call on everybody to participate in protecting the environment.Here are my suggestions.

Walking or riding a bike is a green means of going to school.Upon leaving a classroom,make sure the lights are switched off.After washing your hands,do remember to turn off the tap.Moreover,try to put the garbage in the right place for recycling.

I hope everyone can start with little things,which will eventually make a difference.

Li Ming

【解析】
這是一篇提綱類作文。文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出。考生在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：
1.根據(jù)題干明確自己的寫作目的是以環(huán)保為主題對大家發(fā)出倡議。2.要注意倡議書的格式和語氣，明確寫作的對象，應(yīng)該言辭誠懇，起到號召大家的作用。
3.要點要齊全。但是不能對要點進行簡單的羅列，可以加一些細節(jié)上的描寫，同時使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。
4.文章的結(jié)構(gòu)要合理安排，讓人一目了然。

【范文亮點】

1.文章以“I’m writing this letter to call on everybody to participate in protecting the environment”開頭，直奔主題，開門見山，引出本文的主題與目的；多出祈使句的運用也很符合倡議書的要求，例如“do remember to turn off the tap”、“try to put the garbage in the right place for recycling”等，最后總結(jié)，“I hope everyone can start with little things,which will eventually make a difference.”深化了文章的主題。

2.文章運用了“call on號召”“ a green means of一種很好的做某事的方式”“ make sure確保”“ make a difference”等高分詞組，很好的運用了連接詞“Moreover”等過渡自然。