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7．《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》中學(xué)生版舉行以"An Unforgettable Experience in My High School Life"為題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫篇100-120個(gè)字的文章，記述一件令你難忘的事．要求如下：
1．記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)．
2．簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明你感到難忘的原因或從中得到的啟示．
注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）
An Unforgettable Experience in My High School LifeHow times goes by!It won't be long before I say goodbye to my high school life．Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）It was my turn to give an English speech in class．I felt worried because I was ashamed of my broken English．So I went to Mr．Li，my English teacher，for help．He not only encouraged me，but also offered some valuable advice．I spent nearly two hours practicing it at home until I was satisfied．To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）Through the experience，I know that whenever we have difficulties we should never be afraid to ask others for help．Sometimes the advice from others matters a lot．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》中學(xué)生版舉行以"An Unforgettable Experience in My High School Life"為題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫篇100-120個(gè)字的文章，記述一件令你難忘的事，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)．簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明你感到難忘的原因或從中得到的啟示．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：say goodbye to 說(shuō)再見；Look back on 回顧；be ashamed of 對(duì)…感到羞愧；To my joy令我高興的是；build up建立；
Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）
To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）
It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）

解答 My Most Unforgettable Experience in High School
      How times goes by!It won't be long before I say goodbye to my high school life．Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）It was my turn to give an English speech in class．I felt worried because I was ashamed of my broken English．So I went to Mr．Li，my English teacher，for help．He not only encouraged me，but also offered some valuable advice．I spent nearly two hours practicing it at home until I was satisfied．To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）Through the experience，I know that whenever we have difficulties we should never be afraid to ask others for help．Sometimes the advice from others matters a lot．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．