Question

【題目】短文改錯

Dear Sir,

I’m glad to learn that part-time assistants were wanted in your studio and I’d like to have a try. I’m a student who is graduated from high school soon. Before attending the college, I’ll have a long holiday and I’m determined to make the best of them. Since childhood, I have developed a strong interest in storytelling and watching films. My teacher thinks high of my performance in the language class, when I have also acquired a good knowledge of American movie industry. Except that, I am monitor of my class and thus have gained many experience in management.

I will undertake full responsibility and spare no effort to do my share of work. I am fully convinced that through communication with the staffs, I can get some valuable work experience as well as develop my social skills.

I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Thank you for your consider.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】were—are;

【2】graduated—graduating;

【3】去掉 “attend” 后 “the”;

【4】them—it;

【5】high—highly;

【6】when—where;

【7】Except—Besides;

【8】many—much;

【9】staffs—staff;

【10】consider—consideration

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于應(yīng)用文，李華寫信給對方希望得到一份兼職工作，在信中他介紹了自己的個人信息。

【1】were—are;考查時態(tài)。敘述當(dāng)前應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，根據(jù)主語part-time assistants謂語動詞應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【2】graduated—graduating;考查時態(tài)。本處進(jìn)行時表將來，主動語態(tài)。

【3】去掉 “attend” 后 “the”;考查固定搭配及該詞用法。動詞短語attend college上大學(xué)。

【4】them—it;考查代詞。本處代指holiday，應(yīng)用it指代上文出現(xiàn)的同一事物。

【5】high—highly; 考查副詞。在英語中通常使用副詞做狀語修飾形容詞、副詞、動詞或整個句子。本題中使用副詞highly修飾動詞think。

【6】 when—where;考查定語從句先行詞the language class，代入定語從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語，應(yīng)用where。

【7】Except—Besides; 考查副詞。besides“除了……之外（還有）”還可以作為副詞表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，意為“而且”；except“除了”。由語境可知，此處應(yīng)用Besides。

【8】many—much;考查形容詞。形容詞many通常修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，而much通常修飾不可數(shù)名詞，本句中是不可數(shù)名詞experience(經(jīng)驗(yàn))，應(yīng)用much。

【9】staffs—staff;考查名詞。 staff(員工)本身即為集合名詞，不能加-s。

【10】consider—consideration。 考查名詞。介詞for的后面通常要接名詞做賓語，而consider是動詞，不能作為介詞的賓語。