Question

10．目前，我們身邊到國外留學的學生越來越多，近五年來一直以兩位數(shù)的比例增長，據(jù)統(tǒng)計，2016 年度我國出國留學人員總數(shù)為 54.45 萬人．請根據(jù)這一現(xiàn)象，寫一 篇英語作文，題目為：Studying Abroad：Good Or Bad，就正反兩方面陳述出國留學的 利弊，文章必須包括以下要點，
好 處
1 開拓視野，了解不同文化；
2 獲取一些先進的知識．
弊 端
1 花費多，開銷大；
2 不適應當?shù)厣�活�?br />我的觀點：…
注意：1）文章不少于 100 字；
 2）不必按照提示逐字翻譯，可適當加入自己的觀點．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息目前，我們身邊到國外留學的學生越來越多，近五年來一直以兩位數(shù)的比例增長，據(jù)統(tǒng)計，2016 年度我國出國留學人員總數(shù)為 54.45 萬人．請根據(jù)這一現(xiàn)象，寫一 篇英語作文，題目為：Studying Abroad：Good Or Bad，就正反兩方面陳述出國留學的 利弊，文章必須包括以下要點，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：好 處 開拓視野，了解不同文化；獲取一些先進的知識．弊 端 花費多，開銷大；不適應當?shù)厣�活．我的觀點：…2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Tens of thousands of 成千上萬的；the number of …的數(shù)目；up to 達到；However然而；Besides另外；As far as I'm concerned，以我的觀點來看；
It is believed that there are many advantages in attending schools abroad．（高分句型一）
Second，it can broaden their experience and help them learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries．（高分句型二）
 As far as I'm concerned，I would like to go further study abroad after graduation from college so that I can make a greater contribution to our country when I come back．（高分句型三）

解答 Studying Abroad：Good Or Bad
      In recent years，studying abroad has been popular．Tens of thousands of Chinese teenagers have gone to foreign countries for further study．The number of the teenagers studying abroad is increasing steadily．At the end of 2016，more than 54.45 million students went to foreign countries to study．
      It is believed that there are many advantages in attending schools abroad．（高分句型一）First，students can learn foreign languages more quickly under favorable conditions．Second，it can broaden their experience and help them learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries．（高分句型二）
      However，there are some disadvantages．Most of the students studying abroad are too young to live alone without any living experience．Besides，being far away from their home country，they may feel lonely and homesick．Also，the costs are much higher there than in the native country．
      As far as I'm concerned，I would like to go further study abroad after graduation from college so that I can make a greater contribution to our country when I come back．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．