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【題目】書面表達(dá)

“Your family are God’s gift to you, as you are to them.” 是1984年諾貝爾和平獎(jiǎng)得主Desmond Tutu 曾就個(gè)人與家人關(guān)系說過的一句話。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真品味這句話，然后按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求：

1. 你對(duì)這句話的理解；

2. 結(jié)合具體事例說明；

3. 恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。

注意：

1. 短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；

3. 詞數(shù)：120左右

Desmond Tutu, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984, once said, “Your family are God’s gift to you, as you are to them.”, which tells us that

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Desmond Tutu, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1984, once said, “Your family are God’s gift to you, as you are to them.”, which tells us that parents are to us what lighthouses are to ships. Without parents, we would get lost when we grow up; without us, parents would feel sad and lonely.

I’m the apple of my parents’ eye. As a pupil, I couldn’t remember English words, often failing exams. So bitter was the feeling of being defeated that I thought of giving up. To encourage me, they told me to fill a glass with rapid running water. Unexpectedly, I found however hard I tried , my glass was only half full. Only then, did I realize what I needed to learn English well were right ways. With their help, I mastered the methods of memorizing vocabulary. Now, English has become my strength, which has also become their pride and joy.

No doubt both parents and we are important to each other.

【解析】

試題分析：1984年，諾貝爾和平獎(jiǎng)的得主Desmond Tutu 說過這樣一句話表達(dá)個(gè)人與家人關(guān)系 “你的家庭是神給你的禮物，正如你對(duì)他們一樣。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真品味這句話，然后按要求用英語寫一篇短文。寫作時(shí)要注意結(jié)合具體事例說明，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。注意: 1. 短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；3. 詞數(shù)：120左右

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Only then, did I realize what I needed to learn English well were right ways.運(yùn)用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)；Without parents, we would get lost when we grow up; without us, parents would feel sad and lonely.并列句與固定詞組巧妙地結(jié)合在一起；Now, English has become my strength, which has also become their pride and joy.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。