Question

4．第二節(jié) 書(shū)面表達(dá)
假定你是李會(huì)，你的留學(xué)生朋友Peter發(fā)郵件說(shuō)，他正在學(xué)漢語(yǔ)，但感覺(jué)很吃力，請(qǐng)求你給予幫助．請(qǐng)給他回封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．舉例說(shuō)明漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的特點(diǎn)；
2．提供一些可行的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，Hope this email finds you well!Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties．It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure，while Chinese focuses on the meaning．With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter，my suggestions are as follows：
　　Firstly，I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner，and meet with him on a regular basis．Besides，watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting．
　　Those are the tips on my mind now．I would always be pleased to offer you help．I do hope you will find these proposals practical．
Yours，
Li Hu．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)的作文．就題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容主要包括：一舉例說(shuō)明漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的特點(diǎn)；二提供一些可行的建議；三表達(dá)祝愿．
高分句型：
1．It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure，while Chinese focuses on the meaning．句子里inevitable表示"不可避免的"；while表示"然而"，表示對(duì)比的含義．
這是不可避免的，因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)，然而漢語(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)含義．
2．Firstly，I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner，and meet with him on a regular basis．句子里recommend表示"推薦，建議"，meet with 表示"會(huì)晤"；on a regular basis表示"經(jīng)常地"．
首先，我建議你找一個(gè)中國(guó)人作為你的語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)伙伴，和他經(jīng)常見(jiàn)面．

解答 Dear Peter，
　　Hope this email finds you well!Last time you said you were learning Chinese but encountered some difficulties．It's inevitable because English emphasizes the structure，while Chinese focuses on the meaning．【高分句型一】With regard to the matter you mentioned in your letter，my suggestions are as follows：（舉例說(shuō)明漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的特點(diǎn)；）
　　Firstly，I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner，and meet with him on a regular basis．【高分句型二】Besides，watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting．（提供一些可行的建議）
　　Those are the tips on my mind now．I would always be pleased to offer you help．I do hope you will find these proposals practical．（表達(dá)祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hu

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
while 用作連詞時(shí)，有以下幾種含義：
1．意為"當(dāng)…時(shí)候，和…同時(shí)"，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．例如：
While I was watching TV，the bell rang．（我看電視時(shí)，鈴響了．）
2．意為"雖然，盡管"，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．例如：
While it was late，he went on working．（雖然很晚了，但他還在繼續(xù)工作．）
3．連接兩個(gè)并列句子，表示"對(duì)比"關(guān)系．例如：
He went out for a walk，while I stayed at home．（他出去散步了，而我卻呆在家里．）