Question

【題目】近年來，微信(Wechat)成為了人們非常喜歡的通信工具，但是也給人們帶來一些困擾。請對這一現(xiàn)象談一下自己的看法，內(nèi)容包括1.使用微信的利與弊；2.自己的看法和建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 為使行文連貫可適當增加細節(jié)。

In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. _________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. There are many reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relatively cheap way of communication, which cuts down the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people, especially the youth, with its various functions. Furthermore, it is available everywhere at any time.

However, every coin has two sides. Firstly, our identity can be revealed and we can be in trouble. Moreover, spending too much time on your screen will do great harm to your health. Finally, our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

【解析】本文屬于正反觀點對比的議論文。正反觀點對比類的文章，首先要抓住要點，構(gòu)思文章結(jié)構(gòu)—提出問題—正反觀點對比—說明自己的觀點。

就本文來說，寫作步驟如下：

1. 先提出話題，微信近來日益受到大家的歡迎。

2. 然后分析微信的利與弊。

3. 提出自己的觀點。

4.連句成篇，注意用上恰當?shù)倪B接詞。

【本文亮點】1、文章思路清晰，第一段寫微信的優(yōu)點，第二段寫它的缺點，第三段提出自己的觀點。第一、二兩段都是開頭先用主題句引領(lǐng)全段，然后舉例來證明觀點。2、連接詞的運用也是一大亮點，如：to begin with, next, furthermore, firstly, moreover, finally等的使用，使得文章緊湊有條理。還有，不同觀點之間的銜接使用到位，however, each coin has two sides，花開兩朵，各表一枝。