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13．科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展給我們的日常生活帶來了很大的變化．請你以"Science and technology is changing our life greatly"為話題，談?wù)勀慵胰�代人購物生活的變化，并暢想未來的購物方式�?br />注意：詞數(shù)120左右．開頭已給出．
With the development of science and technology，our way of life has been changing all the time．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展給我們的日常生活帶來了很大的變化．請你以"Science and technology is changing our life greatly"為話題，談?wù)勀慵胰�代人購物生活的變化，并暢想未來的購物方式，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、開放式作文要善于利用自己的想象，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：With the development of science and technology隨著科學(xué)和技術(shù)的發(fā)展；in many ways在很多方面；in the future在未來；prefer to do喜歡做某事；as well as 也，和；
Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．（高分句型一）
Later，supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．（高分句型二）
Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．（高分句型三）
New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．（高分句型四）

解答 With the development of science and technology，our way of life has been changing all the time．Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．（高分句型一）For example，the way of shopping has changed in many ways．My grandmother told me she usually covered a long distance to a small shop in town to buy her goods．Later，supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．（高分句型二）
      In recent years，online shopping has become popular．Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．（高分句型三）
      I think，in the future，we may depend on our robot servants to do the shopping as well as the housework．New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．（高分句型四）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．