Question

【題目】臨近期末，高一同學即將面臨著文理分科的選擇。假定你是李華，你同學Lucy給你來信說到了她對文理科選擇的困擾和焦慮。請你給她回信，安撫她的情緒并提出你的看法和建議。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右; 書信開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

2. 內容要點：

① 安撫她的情緒，勸她不必過于糾結；

② 提出參考意見：認清自己興趣和優(yōu)勢，不盲從他人；向高年級的同學請教 ……

③ 提出看法：無論作何選擇都要努力才能實現自己的期望。

3. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

可能用到的詞匯：焦慮anxiety；理性地 rationally；不辜負 live up to

Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I’m sorry to learn in your letter that you are upset about the coming choice of arts or science. Actually, many senior 1 students have the same aniexty and problem as you. But if we can deal with them rationally, there is nothing to worry.

When it comes to choosing between arts and science, the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths. Never follow others blindly! Besides, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students, who have previous experience and lesson. Finally, whichever we choose, please keep it in mind that only by working hard can we live up to our expection and choice.

I hope my ideas can help you. Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇開放性作文。本次作文要求根據Lucy給你來信說到了她對文理科選擇的困擾和焦慮問題，進行安撫，并提出你的看法和建議。

。要點包括：① 安撫她的情緒，勸她不必過于糾結；

② 提出參考意見：認清自己興趣和優(yōu)勢，不盲從他人；向高年級的同學請教 ……

③ 提出看法：無論作何選擇都要努力才能實現自己的期望名師點睛】

本篇范文較好地完成了文字提示中的要求，本篇全文結構緊湊，思路清晰，要點全面，語言連貫。。

寫作亮點：陳述句與復雜句各交替使用，其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現了作者駕馭句式的能力。

例如：文章使用狀語從句whichever we choose, please keep it in mind that，if we can deal with them rationally, there is nothing to worry..。

非限制性定語從句定語從句, it may be helpful to seek opinions from senior 2 or 3 students, who have previous experience and lesson.。祈使句Never follow others blindly!

倒裝句only by working hard can we live up to our expection and choice。

固定句式when it comes to sth./doing sth，……

動詞不定式作表語the basic rule is to base our choice on our own interest and strengths.

作者使用了moreover、in addition等串聯詞讓各要點有機地串聯在一起。使用了許多詞匯，如the same …as …,　 這些語法結構的使用，說明考生運用語言的能力較強。