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3．假設(shè)你是王林，得知你校擬聘用一名英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)老師，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter已經(jīng)教書(shū)十年，而且對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他發(fā)一封100詞左右的電子郵件，希望他能來(lái)應(yīng)聘．口語(yǔ)老師要求如下：
1．精通英語(yǔ)，大學(xué)畢業(yè)；2．教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，性格開(kāi)朗；3．喜歡學(xué)生，工作負(fù)責(zé)．
注意：1．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？
I'm writing to tell you that there is an English oral teacher wanted in my school．It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）In addition，he must have rich teaching experience for 5 years，and he is an open-minded person．And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）So I hope you may come to apply so that you can learn more about Chinese culture．
Yours，
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英語(yǔ)給美國(guó)朋友Peter發(fā)一封100詞左右的電子郵件，希望他能來(lái)應(yīng)聘，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：精通英語(yǔ)，大學(xué)畢業(yè)；教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，性格開(kāi)朗；喜歡學(xué)生，工作負(fù)責(zé)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）句中It's required that…是固定句式，其中it是形式主語(yǔ)，that為主語(yǔ)從句
And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）句中who引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）句中since引導(dǎo)的是原因狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Dear Peter，
      How is everything going？
      I'm writing to tell you that there is an English oral teacher wanted in my school．It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）In addition，he must have rich teaching experience for 5 years，and he is an open-minded person．And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）So I hope you may come to apply so that you can learn more about Chinese culture．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Wang Lin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．