Question

寫作（滿分30分）

假設你是新華中學的學生李華，不久前某英語雜志社舉辦“ 建設節(jié)約型校園 ”征文比賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇短文：

1. 學校里浪費的現(xiàn)象，如水、電與餐廳食物等；

2. 浪費造成的危害；

3. 你的建議與措施。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120-150；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Building up a Saving Campus

Our school campus is becoming more and more beautiful. But did you notice with the improvement of people’s living standard, how much is wasted on campus? For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, waste running water after washing dishes. In the dining hall, you can see a lot of food thrown away every day.

The habit of being wasteful has a bad effect on our character. We have to pay for those things wasted, and this adds to our expense. What is worse, we are wasting the earth’s resource. So it’s high time we dealt with this problem.

How to reduce the waste? In my opinion, it is everybody’s duty to save energy and resources. We must start with ourselves and from now! Then our society will go on developing and our life will be better.

【解析】

試題分析：考生應不難理解寫作要求和寫作目的，短文的開頭語要寫好，要適時地引導要點上去�？忌�首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構（2）語氣（3）內(nèi)容要點。尤其是內(nèi)容要點要把握準確到位，這是半開放性作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。

考點：提綱作文。

點評：作文要層次清晰，要點全面，表達流暢，切合作文要求，語氣誠懇。文中使用一些極佳的詞語和句子為文章增色，使用高級詞匯及句型。