Question

【題目】高二即將過去，高三已經(jīng)在向同學(xué)們招手。隨著學(xué)習(xí)和心里壓力日益加大，一些同學(xué)的正常生活受到影響，如睡眠不好。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給學(xué)校的英語刊物寫一封信件，向同學(xué)們提出建議，并簡述理由或舉例說明:

1、勞逸結(jié)合；

2、健康飲食；

3、適當(dāng)鍛煉；

4、保持樂觀心態(tài)。

注意：1、短文必須包括所列內(nèi)容；

2、詞數(shù)100左右；

Dear Editors,

With the approach of Senior 3 studies, students who have almost finished Senior 2 are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students’life.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editors,

With the approach of Senior 3 studies, students who have almost finished Senior 2 are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students’ life. This prevents them sleeping well and causes problems with their health. In order to improve the condition, I’d like to offer some advice.

First and foremost, combine work with rest. Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Furthermore, it is important to keep a healthy and balanced diet. Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish will benefit you. In addition, go outdoors and take regular exercise, for physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and mentally healthy. Keeping an optimistic state of mind will contribute to a good physical state.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題這是一篇應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作。請你用給學(xué)校英語刊物寫信，給高三階段壓力很大的同學(xué)提出建議，并簡述理由或者舉例說明。

書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，寫作中要包含以下四點(diǎn)：1、勞逸結(jié)合；2、健康飲食；3、適當(dāng)鍛煉；4、保持樂觀心態(tài)。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，選擇合適的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。