Question

6．Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world．Since babies do not come with child raising manuals（指南），couples，especially future mothers，have to learn from their mothers，aunts，mothers-in-law，or any other relative who is close to them．
As children grow up，parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children，advise them，punish them，lead them to achievements，and teach them．Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately．For example，they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives．I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way．Children must know those kinds of attitudes are not good at all．
There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job，for example，the culture in which they live，the economic situation in their society，and the religious environment．
One group consists of people who don't have economical resources or education．In this group，people get married when they are teenagers．Their Children are taken to their grandparents'homes，so the job of child raising is done by grandparents instead of the real parents．If the grandparents are on the sidewalks selling newspapers，cigarettes，or magazines，the children will be like them，too．Some of them even end up being wallet thieves，gang members and drug users．
Other groups of people are hard workers or well-educated．The children grow up in their parents'homes and are disciplined and punished differently．They learn to respect other people，and they are led to achieve in school，sports and community service．When they grow up，they often become political leaders，community leaders，and professionals in their fields．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇讀寫任務(wù)作文，用簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言客觀、準(zhǔn)確、全面地轉(zhuǎn)述所給文字材料．這就要求考生首先要把握所給材料的整體結(jié)構(gòu)，作者的思路與寫作意圖，基本觀點(diǎn)與論據(jù)；不僅要找到主題句，而且要把握原材料的論證層次．只有客觀、準(zhǔn)確、全面地分析把握原材料，才可能用簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言客觀、準(zhǔn)確、全面地轉(zhuǎn)述．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：a tough job艱苦的工作；try every means to不遺余力地去；bring up撫養(yǎng)；
Parents should try every means to educate their children to behave well．（高分句型一）
There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children．（高分句型二）
To make it clear，two different examples are given，which reveal that different family backgrounds and educational methods can surely produce different effects．（高分句型三）

解答 Child raising is a tough job for couples，especially future mothers．（要點(diǎn)1）Parents should try every means to educate their children to behave well．（要點(diǎn)2）There are many factors that influence the parents in bringing up their children．（要點(diǎn)3）To make it clear，two different examples are given，which reveal that different family backgrounds and educational methods can surely produce different effects．（要點(diǎn)4）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)作文不僅考查文字駕馭能力考查思維的整體性、層次的條理性；不僅考查對(duì)所給材料的客觀、準(zhǔn)確、全面的把握能力，而且考查用地道自然的語(yǔ)言客觀、準(zhǔn)確、全面、簡(jiǎn)潔而概括地轉(zhuǎn)述原材料的能力；不僅考查使用說(shuō)明性文字的能力，而且考查使用評(píng)價(jià)性、說(shuō)理性、思辨性文字的能力．其高級(jí)性還表現(xiàn)為，它沒有多少量化的要求，更多的是內(nèi)在的、定性的要求．它給了考生較大的發(fā)揮余地，但前提是必須把握內(nèi)在的要求．