Question

6．最近幾年越來越多的大學(xué)生加入打工的隊伍，請你結(jié)合下表，就這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文．

現(xiàn)象	1．根據(jù)最近調(diào)查，約25%的大學(xué)生打零工 2．在暑假，這一數(shù)字將增至72% 3．大學(xué)生常做的零活有：家教、服務(wù)員、售貨員等
原因	4．想賺錢支付部分日益增長的學(xué)費 5．想經(jīng)濟上獨立，買一些自己想買的東西
意義	（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：不少于60．文章的開頭已為你寫好．
2．參考詞匯：
調(diào)查survey；家庭教師tutor；學(xué)費tuition；經(jīng)濟地economically；
According to a recent survey．…．
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                  

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題作文，讓考生根據(jù)大學(xué)生打工這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行闡述．寫作時可分為三部分：闡述現(xiàn)象為第一段，提出打工的具體數(shù)據(jù)和職業(yè)；說明原因為第二段；自己觀點為第三段．前兩段盡量采用第三人稱，闡述觀點的部分使用第一人稱．全篇時態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在時．
重點短語及句型：
a part-time job兼職
summer vacation暑假
earn money賺錢
college tuition大學(xué)學(xué)費
in one's opinion就某人看來
broaden one's outlook擴寬眼界
what's more進(jìn)而，而且
They want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition．
他們想要賺錢支付部分日益增長的學(xué)費．
They hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want．
他們想經(jīng)濟上獨立，買一些自己想買的東西．
By doing part-time jobs，college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook．
通過兼職，大學(xué)生們能夠獲得一些社會經(jīng)驗，并且拓寬自己的眼界．
It's of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs．
對大學(xué)生來說，做兼職是很重要的．

解答 參考答案：
    （描述現(xiàn)象） According to a recent survey，about 25 percent of college students have a part-time job（描述現(xiàn)象一）．During summer vacation，this figure will increase to 72 percent（描述現(xiàn)象二）．College students are working as tutors，waiters or salesmen（描述現(xiàn)象三）．
    （闡述原因）Why do they want part-time jobs？First，they want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition．（原因一） Second，they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want．（原因二）
    （自己的觀點）In my opinion，by doing part-time jobs，college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook．（意義一）What's more，part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable opportunity to know the outside world．（意義二）So it's of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs．（總結(jié)）

點評 本次作文是就大學(xué)生打工現(xiàn)象寫一篇文章．要點要寫全，注意分段，不能寫一段式作文，闡述現(xiàn)象為第一段；說明原因為第二段；自己觀點為第三段．寫作時注意高級短語或句式的運用．不能只用簡單句．