Question

6．最近幾年越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)生加入打工的隊(duì)伍，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下表，就這一現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇短文．

現(xiàn)象	1．根據(jù)最近調(diào)查，約25%的大學(xué)生打零工 2．在暑假，這一數(shù)字將增至72% 3．大學(xué)生常做的零活有：家教、服務(wù)員、售貨員等
原因	4．想賺錢(qián)支付部分日益增長(zhǎng)的學(xué)費(fèi) 5．想經(jīng)濟(jì)上獨(dú)立，買(mǎi)一些自己想買(mǎi)的東西
意義	（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：不少于60．文章的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好．
2．參考詞匯：
調(diào)查survey；家庭教師tutor；學(xué)費(fèi)tuition；經(jīng)濟(jì)地economically；
According to a recent survey．…．
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                  

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題作文，讓考生根據(jù)大學(xué)生打工這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行闡述．寫(xiě)作時(shí)可分為三部分：闡述現(xiàn)象為第一段，提出打工的具體數(shù)據(jù)和職業(yè)；說(shuō)明原因?yàn)榈诙�段；自己觀點(diǎn)為第三段．前兩段盡量采用第三人稱(chēng)，闡述觀點(diǎn)的部分使用第一人稱(chēng)．全篇時(shí)態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)及句型：
a part-time job兼職
summer vacation暑假
earn money賺錢(qián)
college tuition大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)
in one's opinion就某人看來(lái)
broaden one's outlook擴(kuò)寬眼界
what's more進(jìn)而，而且
They want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition．
他們想要賺錢(qián)支付部分日益增長(zhǎng)的學(xué)費(fèi)．
They hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want．
他們想經(jīng)濟(jì)上獨(dú)立，買(mǎi)一些自己想買(mǎi)的東西．
By doing part-time jobs，college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook．
通過(guò)兼職，大學(xué)生們能夠獲得一些社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，并且拓寬自己的眼界．
It's of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs．
對(duì)大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，做兼職是很重要的．

解答 參考答案：
    （描述現(xiàn)象） According to a recent survey，about 25 percent of college students have a part-time job（描述現(xiàn)象一）．During summer vacation，this figure will increase to 72 percent（描述現(xiàn)象二）．College students are working as tutors，waiters or salesmen（描述現(xiàn)象三）．
    （闡述原因）Why do they want part-time jobs？First，they want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition．（原因一） Second，they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want．（原因二）
    （自己的觀點(diǎn)）In my opinion，by doing part-time jobs，college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook．（意義一）What's more，part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable opportunity to know the outside world．（意義二）So it's of great significance for college students to do part-time jobs．（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本次作文是就大學(xué)生打工現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇文章．要點(diǎn)要寫(xiě)全，注意分段，不能寫(xiě)一段式作文，闡述現(xiàn)象為第一段；說(shuō)明原因?yàn)榈诙�段；自己觀點(diǎn)為第三段．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意高級(jí)短語(yǔ)或句式的運(yùn)用．不能只用簡(jiǎn)單句．