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18．假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom給你發(fā)來一份電子郵件，表示對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣．他想請你介紹你最喜歡的一個節(jié)日，如端午節(jié)、中秋節(jié)、春節(jié)，你通常是怎么慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個節(jié)日的原因．請你根據(jù)他的問題回復郵件．
提示詞語：eat，get together，share，happy，special．
注意：1．開頭語已給出
2．字數(shù)：100字左右
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad to hear that…
you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
Best wishes to you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom給你發(fā)來一份電子郵件，表示對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣．他想請你介紹你最喜歡的一個節(jié)日，如端午節(jié)、中秋節(jié)、春節(jié)，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：你通常是怎么慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個節(jié)日的原因  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be interested in對…感興趣；traditional Chinese festivals中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；in the shape of 以…的形狀；In short總之
On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）
In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）

解答 Hi!Tom，
       I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
       I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
       Best wishes to you．
                                                                
 Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．