Question

11．第二節(jié)：短文寫作
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
Small things make a big difference．The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society．
 注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文是開放性作文，根據(jù)所給提示，以此為話題進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮并結(jié)合具體事例，寫一篇短文．在寫作時(shí)以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主．重要短語：grow up into （成長(zhǎng)為），be on one's way to（去…的路上），at a crossing（在十字路口），be knocked down （被撞倒），sb rush to （某人沖到…），give sb first aid（急救某人），Compared with…（與…相比），be proud of（對(duì)…自豪）．

解答 It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible member of society．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon．I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly．【高分句型】A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation．Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital．Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what I did．【高分句型】（具體事例）
As a member of the society，I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society．（深化主題）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．