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【題目】“你現(xiàn)在最后悔的是什么？”這是最近一家英文報紙對歐洲60歲以上的老年人進行的一次調查。請你用英語介紹這次調查的情況，并簡單談談自己的看法。詞數(shù)150左右。調查結果如下表：

(數(shù)字的含義：1.沒有賺到足夠的錢；2.鍛煉不夠；3.選錯了職業(yè)；4.年輕時努力不夠)

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Answer 1

【答案】What's your greatest regret?

Recently a survey was conducted in Europe among elderly people over 60 years old.The topic is “What's your greatest regret？” The results are as follows.

On top of the regret lists is that they didn't work hard enough when they were young, which makes up 72% of the people surveyed. Next comes the regret that they chose a wrong career, which makes up 67%. Another 58% say they regret not having had enough exercise when they were young. And the last regret, which accounts for only 11 percent, is that they haven't earned enough money.

In my opinion, it is really true that the greatest regret is not working hard enough when one is young. When young, one is energetic and quick to learn, and should therefore seize the golden chance or he will get nothing but regret when he is old, just as a famous Chinese saying goes.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇看圖表寫作文。“你現(xiàn)在最后悔的是什么？”這是最近一家英文報紙對歐洲60歲以上的老年人進行的一次調查。請你根據(jù)圖表用英語介紹這次調查的情況，并簡單談談自己的看法。認清寫作要求和圖表之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。以圖表為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇看圖表寫作文。文章共分三段，要點齊全，能夠把圖表中的內容用語言展示出來，同時也表達了作者的看法。文章結構布局合理，文中使用高級句子。On top of the regret lists is that they didn't work hard enough when they were young,表語從句中攜帶when引導的時間狀語從句；which makes up 72% of the people surveyed.句中which引導非限制性定語從句，同時過去分詞做后置定語；Next comes the regret that they chose a wrong career,全部倒裝和同位語從句完美結合；it is really true that the greatest regret is not working hard enough when one is young.句中it是形式主語，that從句是真正的主語。