Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是高一某班的一名學(xué)生，上星期你們班就“健康和外貌，哪個更重要？”進行辯論。請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇作文：

一些學(xué)生的觀點----外貌更重要	1. 讓人更有吸引力，有助于交到更多的朋友
	2. 更有機會找到好工作
另一些學(xué)生的觀點----健康更重要	1. 健康使人精力充沛，學(xué)習(xí)工作效率更高
	2. 健康的人很少生病，不會增加家庭負(fù)擔(dān)
你的看法及原因	至少兩點

注意：1. 對所給要點要逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
參考詞匯：負(fù)擔(dān) burden 高效地 efficiently
Last week, our class had a heated discussion about“Which is more important, health or appearance?

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Last week, our class had a heated discussion about“Which is more important, health or appearance?”. Our opinions are divided.

Some of us hold the opinion that appearance is more important than health. As is known to all, good appearance makes a person more attractive, which will help make more friends. Besides, it will be much easier for one to find a good job if he has good appearance, because people usually pay more attention to appearance.

However, others insist that health is more important than appearance. People usually feel energetic if they are healthy. And this will cause them to work and study more efficiently. In addition, people with good health are less likely to suffer illness, adding no extra burden to their family. So it’s of great importance to stay healthy.

As far as I’m concerned, health matters more than appearance in our life. We can’t do anything well without good health. It also does good to our family if we’re all healthy. Only with good health can we work and study better.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，短文必須將“健康和外貌，哪個更重要？”這個主題辯論闡述出來，屬于議論文。短文應(yīng)該主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，可以分成四小段來寫，第一段引出主題，第二段從正方來寫，第三段從反方寫，最后寫自己的觀點。另外，還應(yīng)該盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：As is known to all，Besides，However，efficiently，In addition，be likely to，As far as I’m concerned，Only with good health can we work and study better.等都很不錯。