Question

目前中學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)上普遍存在偏科現(xiàn)象，導(dǎo)致對各科作業(yè)的重視程度也有很大的區(qū)別。
最近，你參加了高二年級組織的“你最重視哪科作業(yè)”的調(diào)查，結(jié)果見下面的餅狀圖。請據(jù)此寫一篇短文，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，并根據(jù)其中兩個數(shù)據(jù)談?wù)撟约旱目捶ā?br />注意：1、短文的開頭已為你寫好。
2、詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

One possible version
Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior two students. The results are as follows: more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their maths homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. Meanwhile English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants, and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students.
There is a profound difference between maths and Chinese. Without doubt, some students hold the view that maths is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense of achievement in it. However, each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value. Therefore, I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.

試題分析：
看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論。此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容。
點評：圖表類作文對于考生的要求很高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的審題能力，能根據(jù)圖表在腦海里勾勒出故事發(fā)生的始末，考生的思維量是非常大的。然后根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容組織要點，要注意要點的完整性，不能有遺漏。在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。