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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意： 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

While taking a walk with my pet dog this morning, I found the middle-aged man nearby was shouting on his phone. Obvious, he had a bad day. Before he left, I noticed his keys were on the ground. So I immediately picked up and ran away to find the man. Several minutes later, I found him, whom was still shouting on his phone beside his car. I walked to him and asked if he could hold on a little seconds. At first, he was angry about my interrupt. Then I showed to his keys and explained the whole thing. On heard my words, he immediately hang up his phone and apologized for his rudeness.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】the→a

【2】Obvious→Obviously

【3】Before→After

【4】在picked和up之間加them

【5】whom→who

【6】little→few

【7】interrupt→interruption

【8】去掉to

【9】heard→hearing

【10】hang→hung

【解析】

試題分析：作者散步時撿到正在打電話的中年男子的鑰匙，打斷他打電話，他起初很生氣，后來向作者道歉。

【1】the→a 此處表示“一個中年人正在大聲地打電話”，故把the改為a。

【2】Obvious→Obviously 句意：顯而易見，他今天過得不好。副詞修飾整個句子，故把Obvious改為Obviously。

【3】Before→After 句意：他離開之后，我注意到他的鑰匙在地上。故把Before改為After。

【4】在picked和up之間加them 因為前面keys是復數(shù)形式，所以我把“它們”撿起來，故在picked和up之間加them。

【5】whom→who 此處非限制性定語從句中的關(guān)系詞作主語，指人，故把whom改為who。

【6】little→few 在這里seconds（秒）是可數(shù)名詞，故把little改為few。

【7】interrupt→interruption 形容詞性物主代詞后面用名詞形式，故把interrupt改為interruption。

【8】去掉to show（展示）是及物動詞，后面直接跟賓語，故去掉to。

【9】heard→hearing 固定搭配on +名詞/doing，表示“一……就……”。故把heard改為hearing。

【10】hang→hung 句意：一聽到我的話，他立刻掛斷電話并向我道歉。根據(jù)句意可知，此處用一般過去時態(tài)，故把hang改為hung。

【知識拓展】

1. (a) few和(a) little的用法：(a) few用在復數(shù)可數(shù)名詞之前，(a) little用在不可數(shù)名詞之前。He took a few biscuits. (=several) He took little butter. (=not much) 比如第6小題 little→few seconds（秒）是可數(shù)名詞，故把little改為few。

2. 固定搭配：on +名詞/doing，一……就……。On hearing the bad news，she couldn’t help crying.一聽到這壞消息，她放聲大哭。