Question

短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿(mǎn)分10分）

改正下面短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾（√），請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2.原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改。

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our school                   1.          .

 sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a                 2.            .

 fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers              3.            .

 attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the               4.          .

 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12..6 seconds                 5.          .

 and broke in the school record. The sports meet                    6.          .

 was really success. That was because we were                     7.          .

all trying to do my best.                                             8.          .

Although I was not one of the winner,                                             9.          .

I was proud of that we had done.                                                10.          ..

Looking forward to receiving your letter.

                                                          

          .

                                                 Yours,

                                                 Li Ping

Answer 1

1．more去掉．

2．holding→held． 

3．√

4．a(chǎn)ttend→attending。 

5．finish→finished．

6．in去掉。

7.success→a success。

8．my→our。

9．winner→winners。 

10．that→what．

解析:

1. 應(yīng)對(duì)文章整體閱讀,以篇章或以句子為單位,進(jìn)行推敲找錯(cuò),切不可孤立地僅著眼于某一行。

2.注意句首和句末，這是考生容易忽略的地方，而錯(cuò)誤有可能就在這個(gè)“隱蔽的角落”

3．做完短文改錯(cuò)題后，務(wù)必要把已改好的短文復(fù)讀一遍，檢查核對(duì)。一般說(shuō)來(lái)，一篇改錯(cuò)應(yīng)該有9處錯(cuò)誤，如果考生實(shí)在找不出錯(cuò)，可以用“排查法”即，將改錯(cuò)常考察的要素（如，人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)，單復(fù)數(shù)，行文邏輯等）一一排查，確保高分。

  1．more去掉．more是“再，又”的意思，根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容。more多余．

  2．holding→held．本句是被動(dòng)句，被動(dòng)句由“be+過(guò)去分詞”構(gòu)成。

  3．√

  4．a(chǎn)ttend→attending。attending it是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)，相當(dāng)于定語(yǔ)從句who attended it．

  s．finish→finished．這里是講運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的事情，要用過(guò)去時(shí)．

  6．in去掉。break the record意思是“打破紀(jì)錄”，break在這里是及物動(dòng)詞。

  7．success→a success。success在這里是可數(shù)名詞，意思是“成功的人或事”。又如：The experiment turned out a success．(這項(xiàng)實(shí)驗(yàn)終于成功了．)

  8．my→our。物主代詞與句子的主語(yǔ)不一致。

  9．winner→winners。“one of+復(fù)數(shù)名詞”表示“……之一”。

  10．that→what．that引導(dǎo)著名詞性從句時(shí)本身無(wú)意義，只起連接詞作用，在從句中不作成分；what引導(dǎo)名詞性從句時(shí)本身有意義，并在從句中作一定的成分。