假如你是李華,你的好友劉捷今年以較好的成績考取了上海外國語大學,請你給她寫封信,以分享她成功的快樂。內(nèi)容應包括以下三個方面的內(nèi)容:1.對她的成績表示祝賀;2.肯定她付出的努力;3.決心向她學習,明年取得好的成績。
注意:1.詞數(shù):120-150;
2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:上海外國語大學:Shanghai International Studies University

Dear Liu Jie,
Haven’t seen you for months! I am extremely happy to know that you have been admitted to Shanghai International Studies University!Congratulations!
There is no doubt that you have devoted a lot to your studies, for which I admire you much! I still remember you told me that if one wants to achieve success, her must have a plan first, and then, stick to it. I will do as you told me.
Now, it is my turn to realize my goal in the coming college entrance examination. I will try my best to work hard and I believe I can also get excellent results like you. Please wait for my good news. I won’t disappoint you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

試題分析:這是一篇提綱類作文,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評:本文屬于提綱類作文,動筆前,一定要認真分析要點,理解要點要表達的含義,不能遺漏要點,跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累,寫作聯(lián)系以外,還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文,這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
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