分析 這是一篇談看法的寫作.闡述中學(xué)生的花銷增加,沒有勤儉節(jié)約的概念的這類現(xiàn)象,分析原因并發(fā)表自己的看法.注意觀點明確,條理清晰,可以用表順序的關(guān)聯(lián)詞,如first/firstly,second/secondly…then,last but not the least等.時態(tài):用一般現(xiàn)在時.結(jié)構(gòu)上,可以先從材料給的信息入手,逐步深入分析原因.使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次.
【亮點說明】take it for granted,the apple in their family's eyes,F(xiàn)rom my opinion of view,regardless of,be favorable to等詞組使文章更生動;First of all,In addition,Moreover,使文章條理清晰;In addition,with the improvement of living standards,parents can afford higher expenses of their children.使用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu);We should limit our expenses and not buy whatever we want regardless of their price.whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句使文章更有水平.
文章的安排分為三部分,開頭部分:開門見山地簡單闡述現(xiàn)象.正文部分:分析原因.結(jié)尾部分:簡要總結(jié),發(fā)表自己的觀點.
解答 According to a survey,in recent years monthly expenses of a middle school student have been on the sharp rise.Many students have no concept of thrift in their mind.They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents.This phenomenon is mainly caused by the following factors.(開門見山地簡單闡述現(xiàn)象)
First of all,nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families.They are the apple in their family's eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money.In addition,with the improvement of living standards,parents can afford higher expenses of their children.Moreover,some students like to pursue fashion.(分析原因)
From my opinion of view,a middle school student,as a pure consumer,should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenses and not buy whatever we want regardless of their price.The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.(簡要總結(jié),發(fā)表自己的觀點)
點評 寫作中一些技巧:
1、審題:審題是做到切題的第一步.所謂審題就是要看清題意,確定文章的中心思想、主題,并圍繞中心思想組織材料.
2、進(jìn)行構(gòu)思,列出簡單的提綱,打造文章之骨架:審好題、立好意后,就要寫提綱,打造文章的骨架.文章布局要做好幾件事:安排好層次段落,鋪設(shè)好過渡,處理好開頭和結(jié)尾.
3、擴(kuò)展成文:根據(jù)字?jǐn)?shù)多少擴(kuò)展成篇.?dāng)U展的內(nèi)容一定要緊扣主題,千萬不要寫那些與主題不相關(guān)的內(nèi)容.展開的方式包括:順序法、舉例法、比較法、對比法、說明法、因果法、推導(dǎo)法、歸納法和下定義等.可以根據(jù)需要任選一種或幾種方式.
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