Question

1．英語課上，老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文．假設(shè)以下短文為你同桌所寫，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
My favorite sport
Though there are different kinds of sports，but swimming is my favorite．It was a very excited experience to learn swimming with my parents when I am five years old．
Swimming is a real good sport．It makes me feeling relaxed．This sport can make me stay health and strong，so I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming．
    Before going to swim，we should pay attention three points．The first is to make your body in a better state．The second is that do not eat too many．The last is that you'd better swim with some friends．These can help you stay safe and enjoy ourselves．

Answer 1

分析 作者在文中介紹了自己最喜歡的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)--游泳，游泳使得作者感到放松并能保持身體健康強(qiáng)壯．作者在文中還給出了游泳時(shí)應(yīng)注意的三點(diǎn)事項(xiàng)．

解答 My favorite sport
Though there are different kinds of sports，but swimming is my favorite．It was a very excited experience to learn swimming with my parents when I am five years old．
Swimming is a real good sport．It makes me feeling relaxed．This sport can make me stay health and strong，so I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming．
Before going to swim，we should pay attention∧three points．The first is to make your body in a better state．The second is that do not eat too many．The last is that you'd better swim with some friends．These can help you stay safe and enjoy ourselves．
詳解：
1．去掉but；考查連詞，Though/Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句時(shí)可與yet/still連用，但不能與but連用，故去掉but．
2．excited改為exciting；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞形式作形容詞修飾物，過去分詞形式作形容詞修飾人，句子的主語是It，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作形容詞．
3．a(chǎn)m改為was；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，根據(jù)句意"當(dāng)我五歲的時(shí)候"可知此處要用一般過去時(shí)．
4．real改為really；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語，修飾形容詞good．
5．feeling改為feel；考查動(dòng)詞的用法，make是使役動(dòng)詞，后面跟省to不定式，即動(dòng)詞原形，故此處用feel．
6．health改為healthy；考查并列成分，這里healthy與后面的strong是并列成分，并列作動(dòng)詞stay的表語，故形式要保持一致．
7．so改為because；考查狀語從句，分析句意為"游泳使我健康強(qiáng)壯，因?yàn)橛斡緯r(shí)身體的每個(gè)部位都能得到鍛煉"，故用because引導(dǎo)一個(gè)原因狀語從句．
8．a(chǎn)ttention后面加to；考查固定短語，pay attention to是固定搭配，意為"注意…"，后面跟名詞．
9．many改為much；考查固定搭配，eat too much是固定搭配，意為"吃得太飽"．
10．ourselves改為yourself；考查反身代詞；結(jié)合上下文分析此處的反身代詞應(yīng)與you保持一致．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題首先要通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確．