Question

9．假定你是John，給北京筆友李聰寫信，要點如下：
    1．非常高興得知李聰在準備高考，并鼓勵他一定能克服各種困難取得好成績．
    2．告訴他你將去北京旅游，你將乘火車于6月11日早晨8：20到達，請他接站，并幫你預訂11日至14日的旅館，最好靠近市中心，房間可以小一些，但不要太貴．
  注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
        2．開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Li Cong，
I'm glad to learn that you are busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination．Dear Li Cong，
I'm glad to learn that you are busy preparing for the College Enterance Examination．Where there is a will，there is a way．I am sure that you will overcome all kinds of difficulties in your study and do well in the examination．（高分句型一）（給予祝愿）
I'm planning to travle to Beijing and stay there for a few days．I'll take the train and arrive at 8：20 a．m on June 11th．Will you please come and meet me at the station？I'm going to stay in Beijing till June14th．Please help me book a room in a hotel around the downtown area，but the price shouldn't be too high．（提出要求） I don't mind if the room is small．（高分句型二）
All the best．
Yours，
John．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I am sure that you will overcome all kinds of difficulties in your study and do well in the examination．
我確信你能克服學習中的各類困難并且在考試中取得好成績．
高分句型二：
I don't mind if the room is small．我不會介意房間是否小．
句型一 ①that you will overcome all kinds of difficulties…該句是一個由that引導的賓語從句，該賓語從句位于形容詞之后 ②該復合句中還使用了一個固定短語：do well in 在某方面做的好
句型二 if the room is small．該句是一個由if 引導的賓語從句

解答 Dear Li Cong，
   I'm glad to learn that you are busy preparing for the College Enterance Examination．Where there is a will，there is a way．I am sure that you will overcome all kinds of difficulties in your study and do well in the examination．（高分句型一）（給予祝愿）
   I'm planning to travle to Beijing and stay there for a few days．I'll take the train and arrive at 8：20 a．m on June 11th．Will you please come and meet me at the station？I'm going to stay in Beijing till June14th．Please help me book a room in a hotel around the downtown area，but the price shouldn't be too high．（提出要求） I don't mind if the room is small．（高分句型二）
   All the best．
                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                 John

點評 該書面表達為一封信，該類作文在寫作時應盡量做到用詞準確，且簡潔明了的語言將文章闡述清楚．提綱里規(guī)定了的寫作要點要盡量涵蓋完全．