Question

作為即將進入高三的學生，將要面對更繁重的學習和生活壓力，因此，保持積極心態(tài)非常重要�，F(xiàn)在，請圍繞“積極心態(tài)與健康、學習、交友及家庭生活"四個方面的關(guān)系，以Keeping a Positive Attitude為題目，寫一篇英語短文，闡述你的觀點及理由。
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120字左右；。
2．短文題目已給出，并不計入總詞數(shù)。
Keeping ,a Positive Attitude

Answer 1

Keeping a Positive Attitude
　　How times flies! It won't be long before we are in Senior 3, when we will be faced with more learning tasks and heavier pressure. Therefore, it's crucial and necessary that we keep a positive attitude both in our study and daily life
　　Keeping a positive attitude does us a lot of good. First of all, it can help us stay healthy physically. Meanwhile, it's also beneficial to our study, for we can usually learn much more effectively when keeping a positive attitude. Besides,it's easier for us to make more friends and get on better with our family if we keep a positive attitude.
　　Now that a positive attitude can bring so much happiness to us, why not try our best to keep it as much as we can in spite of everything?

試題分析：本文的話題是如何在健康，學習，交友及家庭生活四個方面保持積極的心態(tài)，寫作中注意圍繞要點組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意將“積極心態(tài)與健康、學習、交友及家庭生活"四個方面的關(guān)系介紹清楚。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。建議信作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。提出建議要切實可行，要符合英語習慣，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。
【亮點說明】使用了非謂語動詞短語：Keeping a positive attitude does us a lot of good. it's easier for us to make more friends and get on better with our family if we keep a positive attitude.
使用從句：Now that a positive attitude can bring so much happiness to us, why not try our best to keep it as much as we can in spite of everything? 使用了較好的插入語：Therefore，F(xiàn)irst of all, Meanwhile, Besides,