Question

英語課上，老師要求同學相互修改作文。假設以下日記為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。文章中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　　　 2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

May 10，2008　　　　　　　　 Fine

Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that

 

moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

 

difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

 

of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I’m wrong .We can

 

tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. . In

 

this way, we can get along to each other happily and peaceful.

 

Answer 1

while---when greatly---great has---had walk---walking　 but---and 在as和 result間 加a　 his---their　 刪not　 　　 to---with　 peaceful---peacefully