【題目】短文改錯

假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

One evening after work John drove his secretary home because she failed to start her car. Not want to bother his wife, Maureen, he decided not to mention it to him. Later at that night, John and Maureen were driving out to eat while John spotted a high-heeled shoe hid under the passenger seat. Pointing to anything out of the passenger window to distract the wife, he picked up the shoe and throw it out of his window. They arrived in the restaurant a short time later. When they were about to get out of car,

Maureen enquired, “John, have you seen my other shoes?”

【答案】

【1】want改為 wanting

【2】him改為 her

【3】at 改為去掉at

【4】while改為 when

【5】hid 改為hidden

【6】anything改為somthing

【7】throw改為threw

【8】in改為at

【9】加the

【10】shoes改為shoe

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】want改為 wanting. 動詞want與句子主語he構(gòu)成主動關(guān)系，所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞在句中充當(dāng)狀語。

【2】him改為 her. 本句中her指代John的妻子Maureen，指他決定不對妻子提到這件事情。

【3】去掉at. 短語this或that后面接時間名詞，如night等，可以單獨充當(dāng)時間狀語。所以本句中的at是多余的。

【4】while改為 when. 本句是一個固定句式be doing something when...正在做某事在這時...；when是一個并列連詞，意為“在那時”，后面的句中表示意料之外的事情。句意：John和Maureen正要開車外出吃飯，在這時John發(fā)現(xiàn)一只藏在座位下面的高跟鞋。

【5】hid 改為hidden. 動詞hide與名詞shoe構(gòu)成邏輯上的被動關(guān)系，所以使用過去分詞表示被動。本句使用過去分詞短語充當(dāng)定語修飾shoe。

【6】anything改為something. 句意：為了分散妻子的注意力，John指著窗外的某個東西。本句是一個肯定句，所以使用something，而不是anything。因為anything通常用于疑問句和否定句中。

【7】throw改為threw. 句意：他撿起鞋子扔到窗外。本句中和動詞picked和threw構(gòu)成并列關(guān)系，所以都使用過去式。

【8】in改為at 動詞arrive是一個不及物動詞，表示“到達小地方”使用“arrive at...”，到達大的地方使用“arrive in...”。

【9】of后加the. 本句中的car就是指上文提到的car，所以使用定冠詞the表示特指。

【10】shoes改為shoe. 句意：John，你看到我另外一只鞋了嗎？原來John扔錯了鞋。根據(jù)上文可知他扔了一只鞋，所以使用單數(shù)形式。

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