分析 本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文,要求寫一份回信.文章應(yīng)該包括優(yōu)勢,劣勢以及本人的建議等三個方面的內(nèi)容.本文內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當.
【亮點說明】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理,涵蓋了所有要點.文章使用了大量的連貫性過渡性詞語,比如besides,however,apart from,what's more等.這些詞語的使用使得文章連貫流暢,整體性和邏輯性都非常好.communicate with與…交流;Besides另外;However然而;Apart from除…之外;What's more而且;look forward to 盼望;
It would be a great idea because you can learn how to manage money and how to communicate with others effectively.(高分句型一)
Apart from this,you have little experience in the field and if you don't know what books are in demand,you may lose some money.(高分句型二)
I think you should do some research first and learn how to run an online bookstore.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Jack,
I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates.
It would be a great idea because you can learn how to manage money and how to communicate with others effectively.(高分句型一)Besides,it will be easier for you to read new books so that you can learn more.However,opening an online bookstore will take up a lot of your spare time.Apart from this,you have little experience in the field and if you don't know what books are in demand,you may lose some money.(高分句型二)
I think you should do some research first and learn how to run an online bookstore.(高分句型三)What's more,you'd better do the business during holidays.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you again.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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