Question

假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信，向某學生英文報編輯反映該問題。信的內(nèi)容應包括下列要點：焦慮癥狀  頭暈、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等。 
建 議1．考前制定好合適的復習計劃 
2．考試期間正常作息  
3．睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠  
其他建議(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)  
注意：1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。  
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思；   
3. 詞數(shù)：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。  參考詞匯：頭暈—dizzy(adj.)  
Dear editor,  
I’m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. __________________________________            
Li Ming

Answer 1

I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.  
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.  
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.  
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.  
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)

解析試題分析：本文是關于考試焦慮癥的相關內(nèi)容，與考生的生活非常貼近，考生有話可說，有很強的可行性。首先應該用合適的連接詞把考試焦慮癥的癥狀寫清楚，在發(fā)表個人建議的時候，可以適當使用高級的句式和高級的詞匯來給文章增色。在自己的個人建議中可以加入諺語，讓文章更上一層樓。
考點：考查提綱類短文寫作
點評：本文的話題切合考生實際。屬于提綱類寫作，要求考生有較強的整合能力，在寫作時充分利用連接詞，高級句型和詞匯，如果可能在文章結尾運用諺語，以使文章的層次更高。