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18．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾（∨）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞作斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改．

Nearly a week passed after the girl was able to explain what happened to her．One afternoon she set out from the coast in a small boat and was caught in a storm．Towards evening，the boat struck a rock but the girl jumped into the sea．Then she swam to the shore after spend the whole night in the water．During that time she covered the distance of eight miles．Early in next morning，she saw a light ahead．She knew she was near the shore．In arriving at the shore，she struggled towards the light she had seen．That was that she remembered． When she woke up a day later，she found her in hospital．

66．a(chǎn)fter改為before 67．加had 68．√ 69．but改為and 70．spend改為spending 71．the改為a 72．in去掉 73．In改為On或Upon 74．that改為what 75．her改為herself

Answer 1

分析 在這個(gè)女孩還沒(méi)來(lái)得及解釋她發(fā)生了什么事，近一周的時(shí)間過(guò)去了．一天下午，她坐船遇到了風(fēng)暴，臨近傍晚時(shí)，船撞到了巖石，她跳到了水里．然后向岸邊游了整整一夜．第二天早晨，她看到前面有光，她知道岸很近了．一上岸她就掙扎著向有光的地方走去．那就是她能記得的事情，醒來(lái)時(shí)，她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己躺在醫(yī)院了．

解答 Nearly a week passed after the girl was able to explain
                                before
what∧happened to her．One afternoon she set out from the
       加had
coast in a small boat and was caught in a storm．Towards

evening，the boat struck a rock but the girl jumped into the
                                              and
sea．Then she swam to the shore after spend the whole night
                                                        spending
in the water．During that time she covered the distance of eight
                                                               a
miles．Early in next morning，she saw a light ahead．She knew
                  去掉
she was near the shore．In arriving at the shore，she struggled
                                  On/Upon
towards the light she had seen．That was that she remembered．
                                                             what
When she woke up a day later，she found her in hospital．
                                                             herself
1．a(chǎn)fter改為before．句中before表示來(lái)不及…就…
2．加had．句意表達(dá)的是過(guò)去的過(guò)去，要用過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)．
3．正確．
4．but改為and．句意表達(dá)的是承接，不是轉(zhuǎn)折．
5．spend改為spending．句中spend位于介詞after后，要用動(dòng)名詞．
6．the改為a．短語(yǔ)搭配，a distance of多遠(yuǎn)的距離．
7．in去掉．next引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，前面不用介詞．
8．In改為On或Upon．on/upon后接動(dòng)名詞，表示一…就…
9．that改為what．句中she remembered是作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句；從句中remember缺少賓語(yǔ)，要用連接代詞．
10．her改為herself．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句中指代的是她自己．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．