Question

In autumn of 1935, when I was a young man, I was traveling in the north of Indian. One evening, before hunting in the forest all day, I was returning to the place which I had put up my tent. It was getting dark, but I was walking along a road. Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from among the trees. How could I do? Should I jump into the river to save my life? Then I look to the right. In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth was wide opening.  

Answer 1

小題1:In后加 the
小題2:Indian-India 
小題3:before-after
小題4:in ∧which 或which改為where 
小題5:but-and 
小題6:eye –eyes  
小題7:How-What
小題8:Look-looked 
小題9:had-was
小題10:去掉was

試題分析：這篇文章主要講了我年輕時(shí)，在野外露營(yíng)的一次驚險(xiǎn)的經(jīng)歷。
小題1:這里表示特指，故In后加 定冠詞the。
小題2:這里想說(shuō)我正在印度的北部旅行，所以Indian-India 。
小題3:這里想說(shuō)一天傍晚，我在森林里打獵了一整天之后，我回到了搭建帳篷的地方，所以before-after。
小題4:這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，且關(guān)系詞在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，故in ∧which 或which改為where 。
小題5:這里想說(shuō)天黑了，我正沿著一條路走。是并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以but-and 。
小題6:根據(jù)two，可知這里要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以eye –eyes  。
小題7:do要和What進(jìn)行搭配，所以How-What。
小題8:這件事情發(fā)生在過(guò)去，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以Look-looked 。
小題9:there要和be動(dòng)詞搭配，所以had-was。
小題10:with its mouth wide opening是獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，所以去掉was。