【題目】假設你是李華，你的叔叔最近因為吸煙而得了肺病。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示給他寫一封信勸他戒煙。

1. 想吸煙的時候，可以試著喝些水或吃些健康的小吃；

2. 遠離平時經(jīng)常一起吸煙的朋友。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Uncle，

I am sorry to know that...

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Uncle，

I'm sorry to know that you are ill. We all know smoking does great harm to our health, and I think you'd better give up smoking as soon as possible. Firstly, whenever you want to smoke, try drinking some water or eating some healthy snacks. Secondly, maybe you have some friends who often smoke with you. Stay away from them.

My father used to smoke heavily and once had a serious lung disease, but now he has given up smoking and is living a healthy life. So give up smoking right now. I hope you will do it!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封信勸得了肺病的叔叔戒煙。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結構: 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要點：

1.想吸煙的時候，可以試著喝些水或吃些健康的小吃。

2. 遠離平時經(jīng)常一起吸煙的朋友。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點詞組)

do great harm to；give up；as soon as possible；look forward to

第三步: 連詞成句

I'm sorry to know that you are ill.

We all know smoking does great harm to our health, and I think you'd better give up smoking as soon as possible.

Firstly, whenever you want to smoke, try drinking some water or eating some healthy snacks.

Secondly, maybe you have some friends who often smoke with you.

My father used to smoke heavily and once had a serious lung disease, but now he has given up smoking and is living a healthy life.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/ doing,On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤色修改

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