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2．隨著科技的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)進入我們的日常生活，因此網(wǎng)上購物變得越來越普遍．《21世紀(jì)報》就網(wǎng)上購物進行了討論，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容為其投稿．
1．網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)勢：
足不出戶就可以滿足購物要求；商品價格相對便宜；操作簡單．
2．網(wǎng)上購物的不足：
商品存在質(zhì)量隱患；廣告的可信度不確定；容易上當(dāng)受騙．
3．你的觀點：
注意：l．詞數(shù)100左右；2．短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
參考詞匯：quality質(zhì)量
With the development of science and technology，the Internet comes into our everyday life．It helps us in many ways．Shopping：online is a good example．…
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We can buy the things that we want on the Internet without leaving our homes
我們可以足不出戶的在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上購買到我們想要的東西
高分句型二：
Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet，there is still something for us to worry about．
盡管在網(wǎng)上購物很方便，但仍舊存在一些讓人擔(dān)憂的事
句型一 that we want on the Internet without leaving our homes 該句是一個由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that在句中充當(dāng)賓語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞 things
句型二 Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet 該句是一個由though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，而從句中的主語由形式主語it充當(dāng)，真正的主語為不定式 to shop
此外，還使用了以下高級詞匯和固定短語：with the development of 伴隨著．．的發(fā)展  after all 畢竟

解答 With the development of science，the Internet has come into our everyday life．it helps us in many ways．Shopping is a good example．We can buy the things that we want on the Internet without leaving our homes．（高分句型一）Shopping on the Internet can save us a lot of time．What's more，the goods may be even cheaper than those in shops．（描述優(yōu)點）
 Though it is convenient and fast to shop on the Internet，there is still something for us to worry about．（高分句型二）Quality is a big problem．We can't see the goods on the Internet．After all，we can't choose them ourselves．Besides，lots of advertisements on the Internet are untrustworthy，so sometimes we are easily cheated．（描述缺點）
   Therefore，we should be careful while we're enjoying the convenience of high technology．（提出建議）

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．