Question

假定你是李華，你昨天收到好友Tom的來信，他即將要進(jìn)入高中，向你詢問怎樣在一所新學(xué)校交朋友， 請你給他寫一封回信，就如何交朋友方面提一些建議并給出理由：

1.對待他人要友好。如果你這樣做,別人會樂意和你交朋友，因為你是個容易相處的人;

2.多參加課外活動。通過這樣做,你會找到一些和你有共同興趣愛好的人；

3.......

 

注意：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2.詞數(shù)100-120；

3.信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are about to start high school and want to make friends there. ________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom

I’m glad to hear that you are about to start high school and want to make friends there. Here are some tips to help you.

First, why not be friendly to others ? If you do this, your classmates will enjoy making friends with you , for you are easy to get along with. Secondly, you’d better join in after-class activities. By doing this, you will find classmates with the same interests so that you can share your happiness and sorrow together. Thirdly, it would be a good idea to remember the names of your classmates. That way, they feel you are concerned about them and are willing to share their deepest feelings and thoughts.

I hope you will find these ideas useful and make good friends with your new classmates as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，要求以李華的口吻寫一封信，關(guān)于在新學(xué)校如何交友。要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主的時態(tài)。要點包括：1.對待他人要友好。如果你這樣做,別人會樂意和你交朋友，因為你是個容易相處的人;2.多參加課外活動。通過這樣做,你會找到一些和你有共同興趣愛好的人；3.......；

寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。

亮點說明：這篇范文里較好的運用了連接詞，如：First、Secondly、Thirdly；同時狀語從句的使用也較多，如By doing this, you will find classmates with the same interests so that you can share your happiness and sorrow together.中so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句。

考點：考查提綱類作文