Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

人人都渴望朋友和友誼。為此，有人提出了建立，加深和保持友誼的三要素：1.誠實(shí)：建立友誼；2.慷慨大方和樂于分享：加深友誼；3.通情達(dá)理：使友誼持久。請圍繞以上三點(diǎn)，寫一篇說明文，注意：1.使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；2.詞數(shù)100左右；3.參考詞匯：understanding adj./n.通情達(dá)理的/理解；generosity n.慷慨大方。

Answer 1

【答案】

To establish a long-term friendship，we must learn three important factors：be honest，be generous and be understanding .

First, honesty is where friendship starts. Friends must trust each other. If we tell lies, our friends will find out that we aren’t reliable, which may result in losing friends. Second, generosity means sharing, aimed at helping friendship grow. But it is not involved with only money. We can share other valuable things such as studying skills and feelings, etc. Third, understanding makes our friendship last longer. If friends have quarrels , just put ourselves in our friends’ shoes, and we can understand them better, thus making up and as a result, our friendship will be stronger and stronger and last forever.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)，考生首先要根據(jù)要求詳細(xì)討論。本文的話題是建立，加深和保持友誼的三要素，屬于說明文，所以使用一般現(xiàn)在時的時態(tài)。在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語aimed at doing sth旨在……；be involved with 與……有關(guān)；such as諸如……；put…in sb. else’s shoes把自己放在別人的位置上考慮；thus making…因此使得……；以及which may result in losing friends這個非限制性定語從句。為文章增色不少。