Question

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。（請(qǐng)將開(kāi)放作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi)）

Answer 1

An English proverb has it that “it’s no use crying over the spilt milk”. This picture precisely captures one of such situations—a bottle of milk has been accidentally dropped onto the ground. The reactions of the two individuals in the pictures are totally different. One exclaims “Oh, God, it’s all finished!” whereas the other one is more positive and calm, claiming that “there is still some left.”
There are rich implications underlying this scene. For the same event, two different individuals make two totally different observations and comments. For the pessimistic mind, they tend to give up. Finally, they would blame the failure on others.
By contrast, people with an optimistic state of mind would turn the negative into the positive, through efforts. With strong willpower, they would persist to the end, convinced that as long as they keep trying, their hard efforts would pay off. Those are the people who can often succeed where others fail. Obviously, they are the people whom we should try to emulate.

試題分析：這是一篇開(kāi)放式作文，也是看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫(huà)反映了人們對(duì)待同樣問(wèn)題的不同看法，寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文出現(xiàn)了一些常用的詞組：tend to往往， blame sth on sb把…歸咎于…，By contrast,相比而言，還有復(fù)雜的句型：An English proverb has it that “it’s no use crying over the spilt milk”.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句和it做形式賓語(yǔ)， One exclaims “Oh, God, it’s all finished!” whereas the other one is more positive and calm, claiming that “there is still some left.”這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， There are rich implications underlying this scene.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做定語(yǔ)， With strong willpower, they would persist to the end, convinced that as long as they keep trying, their hard efforts would pay off.這句話用了過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)和as long as引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句， Those are the people who can often succeed where others fail. Obviously, they are the people whom we should try to emulate.這兩句話都用了定語(yǔ)從句。