分析 本文是看圖作文,根據(jù)所提供的一幅圖和所給要點(diǎn)信息為?瘜懸黄涛,記述班級同學(xué)參加"誠信教育"系列活動的全過程.寫作要點(diǎn):1.全班同學(xué)開班會,圍繞"誠信"展開討論;2.在班長的帶領(lǐng)下,全班宣誓;3.在以后的考試中,在無人監(jiān)考考場同學(xué)們都能誠信考試;4.班級榮獲"誠信班集體"稱號.又屬于提綱作文.在寫作時(shí)人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱.時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主.重要短語:carry forward (發(fā)揚(yáng),弘揚(yáng)),a variety of (各種各樣的),get involved in (牽涉,牽扯,涉及),take an oath發(fā)誓,宣誓,bring forward (提出),agreed on (一致同意),speak for(順便說),hold an class meeting(開班會).
【高分句型】
1.Recently,to carry forward the value of honesty,a variety of activities have been held in our school.
這里是不定式作目的狀語.主句中用了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動語態(tài).
2.Then led by our monitor,we took an oath that we would take any test honestly without invigilators.
這里是過去分詞led作狀語,主句為we took an oath that we would take any test honestly without invigilators.主句中的主語we與所給動詞lead構(gòu)成邏輯上的被動關(guān)系.
解答 Recently,to carry forward the value of honesty,a variety of activities have been heldin our school.【高分句型】Our class also got involved in it.We held an honesty-themed class meeting.(開頭-引出話題) All the students discussed what honestymeant to us and brought forward various ideas about how to encourage honestbehaviors.Finally weagreed on trying no-invigilation exams.(Picture 1)Then led by our monitor,we took an oath that we would take anytest honestly without invigilators.【高分句型】(Picture 2)In the following exams,we did as that we had promised.The result was amazing:no one cheated and we felt a strongerself-respect and responsibility.(Picture 3)A good deed speaks for itself and we got an award as an Honest Class.(Picture 4)Honesty is the best policy.How true it is!(結(jié)尾)
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