Question

健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以Health為題，談?wù)勀銓?duì)健康的看法：

保持健康的重要性。

保持健康的方法。

多吃水果蔬菜，保持飲食平衡，避免高糖、高脂肪的食物;

多鍛煉，健身強(qiáng)體;

摒棄不良習(xí)慣。

你自己的看法。

要求:

可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫，但不可逐條翻譯;

詞數(shù)：120左右。

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Answer 1

Health

Health is far more important than wealth .Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career .On the contrary，poor health leads to nothing.

How to keep healthy ?Firstly，it is very important for us to eat more fruit and vegetables because they provide vitamins .we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat so that we can keep a balanced diet .Secondly，we should have enough and reasonable sleep，which can refresh our bodies and protect us from disease .Thirdly , we’d better take physical exercise every day to make our bodies strong .Besides ,we have to avoid too much work pressure .Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking.

In conclusion ,if we stick to the advice given above ,we’ll lead a healthy life.

【解析】

試題分析：對(duì)于談看法的文章，注意條理要清晰，可以用表順序的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，如first/firstly.second/secondly...then ,last but not the least one等等。注意文中所給的信息，不可遺漏，可以多進(jìn)行一些補(bǔ)充，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)上：可采取總分模式。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】far more important than ，On the contrary，get rid of，In conclusion等詞組使文章更生動(dòng)；序數(shù)詞的使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly，Besides，F(xiàn)inally使文章條理清晰；we should have enough and reasonable sleep，which can refresh our bodies and protect us from disease使用非限定性定語從句；if we stick to the advice given above過去分詞作狀語修飾名詞，使文章更有水平。表達(dá)對(duì)某事的看法時(shí)，開頭使用： we have to，we’d better, we should…it is very important for us to等。文章的安排分為三部分，開頭部分：開門見山地引出提建議的內(nèi)容。正文部分：給出建議，指出其可取之處，。結(jié)尾部分：一句話總結(jié)，清晰明了。（表示概括歸納的詞語：in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking,as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion）

考點(diǎn)：考查對(duì)材料性作文的寫作