Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使其構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Anthony Ant had hundreds of friends, but sometimes he still felt alone. Anthony lived in an anthill in the crack of a sidewalk. All of his friends looked just like Anthony: small, and brown, with six legs and two wiggling antennas (觸角). Every day, Anthony and his ant friends lined up to march out of the anthill and across the sidewalk to the tall grass. There they looked for crumbs and seeds to bring back to the anthill for supper.

“Why do we always have to stay in line?”Anthony asked. “I want to go into the grass on my own and see what there is to see.”

“I don’t know,” said Abby, a friend of Anthony. “This is the way we’ve always done it.”

“That doesn’t seem like a very good reason,” Anthony said. “I’m going to turn left up here at the maple root.”

And he did.

None of the other ants came with Anthony, because they always did what they were told.

On his own, Anthony had a much nicer view of the maple root. He could see all the way to a distant flower bed, where colorful blossoms towered over the grassy space.

Anthony decided to walk to the flowers, but after an hour of walking, they seemed just as far away as ever. He had never been so tired. He decided to turn around.

When he did, Anthony couldn’t see the path home. The grass had closed in around him，and he was lost. Usually he just followed the ant line in front of him to find the way, but now he was all alone.

Anthony walked in the direction he thought was home, but he was starting to feel scared. A bird flew overhead. Should he ask the bird for help, or should he hide? Anthony knew that some birds ate ants, but he couldn’t remember which ones were nice and which ones were hungry.

注意：續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。

Para 1: He hesitated, wondering what to do.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Para 2: He walked on and on.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Para 1: He hesitated, wondering what to do. He remembered that he should turn left at the ample root. However, on the hillside stood a forest of ample trees. At which point should he turn left? He was completely at a loss. Never did he feel so lonely.

Para 2: He walked on and on, without thinking whether it was the right direction home. So tired was he that he lay down under the tree to have a rest. He was about to give up when he heard noises. Some ants were walking in a line, four of them carrying a large cookie on their shoulders. When they approached him, he could tell that they were his nest-mates, which could be judged from the familiar smell they gave out. One of them touched him with his antennas, asking, “Why are you here alone?” Anthony told him what had happened. Finally, Anthony followed his nest-mates and arrived home. Then he was aware why they had to stay in line when searching for food outside.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是讀后續(xù)寫。通過閱讀所給文章可知，螞蟻Anthony 對于大家為什么總是要一起排隊覺得很奇怪。一天，他決定自己單獨出去轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)。出發(fā)的時候他記得回來時要在楓樹那里左轉(zhuǎn)。他在外面走了一個多小時之后，感到很疲憊，決定轉(zhuǎn)身回家，這時發(fā)現(xiàn)自己迷路了。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第1段開頭是：他猶豫著，不知道該怎么辦。接下來應(yīng)該寫他想起來了應(yīng)該在楓樹那里向左轉(zhuǎn)，但是山上是一片楓樹林，他不知道是哪棵樹那里左轉(zhuǎn)。他感到很茫然無措。第2段開頭是：他繼續(xù)往前走，這時聽到有聲音。他看到一群螞蟻向他這里走來，從他們身上散發(fā)出的氣味， 他能夠判斷出他們是他同巢的伙伴，于是高興地跟著他們回家了。他終于理解了為什么外出覓食要排隊。續(xù)寫時要先仔細閱讀文章時，然后根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容展開合理的想象。