2012倫敦奧運會展示了我國體育強國的實力，孫楊等奧運冠軍已逐漸成為青少年的偶像。“如何與奧運冠軍一同成長”已成為各級學(xué)校、教育機構(gòu)青少年的熱點話題。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

1．奧運冠軍的共同點：①追求卓越；②尊重他人(對手，裁判，媒體等)；③永不言敗。

2．如何做生活中的冠軍：①明確的目標(biāo)是動力的源泉；②專注和良好的心態(tài)是成功的決定因素；③你的觀點(至少兩點)。

注意：1.對所給要點，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．詞數(shù)100左右。短文中已寫好的部分，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．參考詞匯：追求pursue; 卓越excellence; 因素factor

Boys and girls，

Our great motherland has seen 2012 London Olympic Games, and we admire all the Olympic Champions very much.

 

 

 

 

That's all. Thank you!

 

One possible version：

Boys_and_girls，

Our_great_motherland_has_seen_2012_London_Olympic_Games,_and_we_admire_all_the_Olympic_Champions_very_much.

All the Olympic Champions have much in common. They go all out to be excellent—swifter, higher, and stronger. They show respect for everyone. Besides, faced with one failure after another, they never give up.

How can we become a champion in real life and make a difference? Firstly, we must set a goal, which will inspire us to pursue what we want, no matter what difficulties we may come across. Secondly, concentration and a good state of mind are decisive factors in success. What's more, we must learn to deal with stress, build up self?confidence and try to focus on our goals all the time. Only in this way can we become a champion in real life!

That's_all._Thank_you!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求以 “如何與奧運冠軍一同成長”為題目， 根據(jù)提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。文章開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，通過分析要點我們可以把中間正文段落分為兩大部分，一部分介紹奧運冠軍的共同點：①追求卓越；②尊重他人(對手，裁判，媒體等)；③永不言敗。第二部分講述如何做生活中的冠軍：①明確的目標(biāo)是動力的源泉；②專注和良好的心態(tài)是成功的決定因素；③你的觀點(至少兩點)。因為要點較多，在寫作時要注意使用表示順序的連接詞，比如firstly，secondly，on the one hand，on the other hand等，以使文章內(nèi)容層次清晰。其次，因為要求寫發(fā)言稿，所以文章應(yīng)該使用第一人稱，使用一般現(xiàn)在時，如過提出號召，則可以使用將來時態(tài)。再者，在文章語言上要有號召力，可以適當(dāng)使用祈使句 。

【亮點說明】本篇范文層次清晰，要點全面，語言流暢自然。作者在第二段開頭提出要點All the Olympic Champions have much in common.作為主題句，然后介紹了他們共同的特點。在第三段作者同樣使用了總分的結(jié)構(gòu)，以How can we become a champion in real life and make a difference?開頭，這一問句既起到了過渡的作用，又起到點明本段中心的作用。然后在段中使用了表示順序的連詞firstly，secondly，what’s more等連接了三個要點，做到了層次分明，銜接緊湊。最后作者使用了一個倒裝句Only in this way can we become a champion in real life!提出倡議，增強了語言的感染力。

考點：考查提綱作文

 

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