Question

16．假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，受學(xué)生會邀請為高一新生作交流發(fā)言．發(fā)言主題為"高中生要學(xué)會什么"．請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷和體會，準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿．內(nèi)容包括：
1．學(xué)會做人；
2．學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)；
3．學(xué)會其他．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，只將發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容寫在答題卡上．
Dear students，
I am glad to be here to share my idea about what you should learn．
                                                  
Thanks for your attention．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一份英語發(fā)言稿，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷和體會談?wù)劯咧猩�要學(xué)會什么．首先學(xué)會做人，然后學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)，最后獨(dú)立，克服生活中的困難等等．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為學(xué)會做人．第二部分為學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)．第三部分為學(xué)會其他．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
cooperate with 與…合作
 get along well with  與…相處的好
develop the good habit of養(yǎng)成好的習(xí)慣
For instance 例如
It is highly recommended that…強(qiáng)烈推薦，此句型后需要用虛擬語氣should
Only in this way can we form the good habit of learning．Only+介詞短語后用部分倒裝

解答 Dear students，
    I am glad to be here to share my idea about what you should learn．From my point of view，how to be a man is first required．We had better grow up to learn to be honest and kind．It is highly recommended that we should spend more time in helping and cooperating with others．In that way，we can learn how to get along well with others and know who we are，what we should do and what we'd better not．
The second required is to study．Learning how to learn and developing the good habit of learning are the two vital parts in the process of study．For instance，we are supposed to preview before class，pay close attention to what our teacher are saying，and review the knowledge we have gained．Only in this way can we form the good habit of learning．
    Besides，It is advisable for us to learn how to live independently and how to deal with the difficulties properly in daily life．Learn to wash our clothes，clean rooms，cook，etc．
That's what I'd like to say．What's your opinions？
Thanks for your attention．

點(diǎn)評 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．