Question

9．假定你是李華，校讀書俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人．俱樂部將在下周三下午三點(diǎn)在報(bào)告廳進(jìn)行英語朗讀比賽（recitation contest）．請(qǐng)你給外教Tom寫一份電子郵件．內(nèi)容如下：
1．邀請(qǐng)他擔(dān)任比賽評(píng)委；
2．問他屆時(shí)是否有空出席；
3．請(qǐng)他向?qū)W生推薦合適的文學(xué)作品．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Mr．Tom，
I'm writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesdayafternoon in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）If available then，could you do us the favor？And we would appreciate having you as a judge．By the way，it would be very nice if you can recommendsome classic English literary works suitable for usstudents．（高分句型二）Thanks for considering ourrequest．
I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliestconvenience!（高分句型三）
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，校讀書俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人．俱樂部將在下周三下午三點(diǎn)在報(bào)告廳進(jìn)行英語朗讀比賽（recitation contest）．請(qǐng)你給外教Tom寫一份電子郵件，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：邀請(qǐng)他擔(dān)任比賽評(píng)委；問他屆時(shí)是否有空出席；請(qǐng)他向?qū)W生推薦合適的文學(xué)作品．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be present出席；do us the favor幫助我們；By the way順便說一下；suitable for適合；look forward to盼望；
I'm writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）
By the way，it would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students．（高分句型二）
I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Tom，
       I'm writing to invite you to be present at the recitation contest organized by the reading club at three next Wednesday afternoon in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）If available then，could you do us the favor？And we would appreciate having you as a judge．By the way，it would be very nice if you can recommend some classic English literary works suitable for us students．（高分句型二）Thanks for considering our request．
      I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience!（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．