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書面表達(dá)

安徽黃山(the Yellow Mountain)被聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織定為世界自然文化遺產(chǎn)。假設(shè)外國(guó)友人到你校參觀后，準(zhǔn)備去黃山旅游。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)向他們簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下黃山。

1．位于安徽省南部，是中國(guó)著名的旅游勝地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。

2．乘汽車去大約要花3個(gè)小時(shí)，也可以乘火車或飛機(jī)去。

3．登上黃山可領(lǐng)略云海(the sea of clouds)、奇松(wondrous pines)、怪石(unique rocks)等秀麗的風(fēng)景及清晨美麗的日出。

詞數(shù)：100左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the south of Anhui Province.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreign tourists pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about three hours to get there by bus.You can also go there by train or by plane.While you are climbing the mountain，you can enjoy the sea of clouds，wondrous pines and unique rocks around  you.In the early morning when the sun rises，the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit and you’ll really enjoy yourselves there.

【解析】

試題解析：

認(rèn)真審題，知道要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，把要點(diǎn)加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M(jìn)行概括；概括時(shí)可以主要用簡(jiǎn)單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生的綜合語(yǔ)言能力

點(diǎn)評(píng)：要認(rèn)真審題，用正確的語(yǔ)言表示。切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。