Question

假設(shè)你是李華, 距高考還有2個(gè)月左右，現(xiàn)在你正在備戰(zhàn)高考, 中學(xué)生活即將結(jié)束, 在這個(gè)特殊時(shí)期, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給自己的父母寫一封信。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1. 感謝父母多年來, 特別是高三這一年來的關(guān)懷。
2. 向父母簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況。
3. 高考之后幫父母做些家務(wù)和自己的打算。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
Dear parents,
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously.  
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Yours
LI Hua

Answer 1

Dear parents,
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously. I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion, because words have failed me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care you have shown for me, especially since I went to Senior Three. These days I have been studying hard and have made some progress. And everything has got along well with my college entrance examination. I will perform my ability in the future exam. I hope you both can set your mind at rest.
After the exam, I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before. And I also mean to learn to cook for you both in person.
My dear parents, everything is going on well with me and do have a rest!
Best wishes！
Yours
LI Hua

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫作的時(shí)候注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如nothing but，thanks to，make some progress，get along well with, intend to，mean to，have a rest；運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)的定語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：especially，because，and，after等等。