Question

目前，不少人在寫作文或交流時喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場討論。請根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點。

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的觀點
1．有點荒誕，有時讓人無法理解 2．違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助	1．幽默，使語言更生動 2．有助于表達(dá)思想	1… 2. …

荒誕ridiculous

注意： 

1. 對所給提示，不要簡單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.

40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.

However, the rest of the students are fond of it. They think what they say will sound humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.

In my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于議論文的題材，采用“三段式”文體。首先對本班就有關(guān)是否使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言進(jìn)行討論的情況進(jìn)行總體說明。然后對40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是不好的，有點荒誕，有時讓人無法理解it ridiculous to see or hear words，it’s hard for them to make themselves understood.同時違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則，對學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.然后對其余的學(xué)生的觀點進(jìn)行闡述，幽默，使語言更生動They think what they say will sound humorous，有助于表達(dá)思想it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.最后提出自己的觀點，可以就自己反對或是支持的觀點進(jìn)行闡述。

考點：提綱類寫作

點評：對于作文的寫作，特別是議論文發(fā)表觀點的文章是很好寫的一種文體。我們平時所積累的東西，要在寫作之前就回想，要將自己記得好的句型句式運用到自己的作文中，這樣文章才能有東西可寫，才能表達(dá)有深度，比如寫作過程中多用定語從句，多用起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞，多用倒裝、虛擬語氣等，這些都要求學(xué)生平時積累好句式，在具體的寫作中，只要句式正確，才適當(dāng)增加具體的單詞，這樣才能以不變應(yīng)萬變。